tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101018605699818440.post3788167142392275402..comments2024-03-22T15:50:28.776+13:00Comments on Ofa @ Panmure Bridge School: Holiday Reading - Retell (using 25 words or less)PBS Bloggershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17718158506607083303noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101018605699818440.post-4458180615246486622016-04-19T22:38:27.983+12:002016-04-19T22:38:27.983+12:00Hi Ofa, I like how you have gave the location on w...Hi Ofa, I like how you have gave the location on where the big mountain is. I also like how you have an image to match your work.aminiasihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02977651187356968100noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2101018605699818440.post-26436518120262614762016-04-19T20:24:44.458+12:002016-04-19T20:24:44.458+12:00Hi Ofa, Your retell is great. I like how you expla...Hi Ofa, Your retell is great. I like how you explain where and what Everest is. You have a capital e for earth if you notice please fix it. Ohhsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17416583868915227548noreply@blogger.com