All about me
Hi My name is ofa and I am nine and I like to play rugby league because it’ a fun sport to play..I go to Panmure Bridge School.I am tall and I weight 45.I would Like to talk about the most important things in my life like tongan,school,family.
I would talk about my country first.Tonga is important to me because when I was born most people looked after me and took me to places..I would Like to forgive them for their kindness.My secound reason is that in tonga I use to play with my friends talk to them and communicate with them a lot.
friends so they can give me ideas.I would talk about my school..I Like to go to school to have a good Education.my best subject in school is writting because I get to writte lot’s of things like a recount story commmec and other stuff too.In writting sometimes I write with my friends.
My family is important to me because they Encourage me to do things that I can’t do.they support me on Everything I do because They love me.My family is important because how they look after me and take care of me.when I am sick they will alway’s take care of me I love my family and they love me to.
I like to eat ice-cream with strawberry.When I have spare time I like to play baseball with my friends and have fun.when I am inside I do My chores like cleaning the dishes and clean my bedroom.
It's good to see you posting your work now Ofa. This is an interesting piece of writing. You have told the readers a lot about yourself.
ReplyDeleteNext time remember to change all the mistakes that your buddy checkers find. Your name should start with a capital and some other words don't need a capital letter like "encourage" and "everything."