Hi Ofa I like your Poem about your feelings. I would probably be feeling the same things as you if I went to the Rio Olympic games. Keep up the great work you have done so far. Daniel
I completely agree with Daniel. I really like the way that you have captured your feelings about traveling to Rio and watching the athletes compete. I also liked the way that you highlighted your 'feeling' words in orange. That made it very easy to read and to understand what you had written. Good thinking!
I hope that you have enjoyed the Winter Learning Journey programme, Ofa. You have done a wonderful job, both with the activities and with your commenting. Thanks for providing so many helpful, thoughtful and positive messages for your school mates and friends. I have been so impressed by your dedication and hard work! I hope that you will also join us next summer when we blog together again. The summer programme will be called a 'Summer Learning Journey.' It will have a set of completely new activities!
See you in a few weeks when I come into Panmure Bridge to hand out the certificates and the prizes for the 'Top 3' bloggers!
Hi Ofa
ReplyDeleteI like your Poem about your feelings. I would probably be feeling the same things as you if I went to the Rio Olympic games. Keep up the great work you have done so far.
Daniel
Hi Ofa,
ReplyDeleteI completely agree with Daniel. I really like the way that you have captured your feelings about traveling to Rio and watching the athletes compete. I also liked the way that you highlighted your 'feeling' words in orange. That made it very easy to read and to understand what you had written. Good thinking!
I hope that you have enjoyed the Winter Learning Journey programme, Ofa. You have done a wonderful job, both with the activities and with your commenting. Thanks for providing so many helpful, thoughtful and positive messages for your school mates and friends. I have been so impressed by your dedication and hard work! I hope that you will also join us next summer when we blog together again. The summer programme will be called a 'Summer Learning Journey.' It will have a set of completely new activities!
See you in a few weeks when I come into Panmure Bridge to hand out the certificates and the prizes for the 'Top 3' bloggers!
Until then, have a great rest of your holiday :)
Rachel