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Saturday 6 January 2018

Summer Learning Journey - Week 3 - Day 4 - Activity 1

Today for the Summer Learning Journey I have completed activity 1 for day 4. For this activity I had to use the following sentence starter from the original book (Hairy Maclary) to finish the story.

"Out of the gate and off for a walk went Hairy Maclary from Donaldson's ..."

Out of the gate and off for a walk went Hairy Maclary from Donaldson's Dairy and Hercules Morse as big as a horse, with Hairy Maclary from Donald's Dairy. Bottomley Potts covered in spots, Hercules Morse as big as a horse and Hairy Maclary from Donald's Dairy. Muffin McLay like a bundle of hay, Bottomley Potts covered in spots, Hercules Morse as big as a horse and Hairy Maclary from Donald's Dairy. Bitzer Maloney all skinny and bony, Muffin McLay like a bundle of hay, Bottomley Potts covered in spots, Hercules Morse as big as a horse and Hairy Maclary from Donald's Dairy. Schnitzel von Krumm with a very low tum, Bitzer Maloney all skinny and bony, Muffin McLay like a bundle of hay, Bottomley Potts covered in spots, Hercules Morse as big as a horse and Hairy Maclary from Donaldson's Dairy. With tails in the air they trotted on down past the shops and the park to the far end of town. They sniffed at the smells and they snooped at each door, when suddenly, out of the shadows they saw.... SCARFACE CLAW the toughest Tom in town. "EEEEEOWWWFFTZ!" said Scarface Claw. Off with a yowl a wail and a howl, a scatter of paws and a clatter of claws, went Schnitzel von Krumm with a very low turn, Bitzer Maloney all skinny and bony, Muffin McLay like a bundle of hay, Bottomley Potts covered in spots, Hercules Morse as big as a horse and Hairy Maclary from Donaldson's Dairy, straight back home to bed.

THE END

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ofa

    It's Allie again from the SLJ team!

    I just love Hairy Maclary he is such a cool character along with all of his friends.
    For this activity you had to create your own story using the beginning of the original story. I see that you have just told us the story of Hairy Maclary.
    Do you think you would be able to make up a new story?
    Maybe Hairy Maclary could go to the beach or the farm? You could make is so all of his friends go there too! Or you could even create some new friends for him to meet along the way.

    If you could give this one another go I would really like to read what you come up with!

    I'm sure you will do a great job and I look forward to reading it.

    Thanks Ofa

    Until next time

    Allie :)

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  2. Hello Ofa
    Well done on completing this summer learning journey activity. I remember reading Hairy Maclary when I was younger - it was my favorite series back then. Keep up the amazing work Ofa!
    Daniel

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