Today for the Summer Learning Journey I have completed the bonus activity for Day 1, Week 3. For this activity I had to create a postcard drawing and describe it as well. I had to draw my postcard on a google drawing.
Describing.
1. Roller Coster
2. Kiwi
3. Double Hokey Pokey Ice Cream
4. Clouds
5. Sun
Hi Ofa,
ReplyDeleteMe again! :0)
Your post card made me smile as I really liked the cute eyes on the roller coaster wagon.
Moving forwards, I would like for you to think about composition when you do a draw. I can't quite see how does the kiwi and hokey pokey ice-cream fit in with the roller coaster as they seemed out of place. In order for you to gain full points for this activity I will need you to adjust it. You could perhaps divide your post card in 3 distinct sections and put the 3 draws separate in each section. Could you do that and let me know?
Keep up the good work! Breath in and out and keep blogging!
Kia Kaha,
Patricia
Hello Ofa
ReplyDeleteGreat job on completing this summer learning journey activity. I like how you drew New Zealand's native animal - the Kiwi. Your roller coaster look amazing and I like how you put the clouds and the sun above it. Keep up the amazing work.
Daniel